Wednesday, October 28, 2009

Like as to love as love is to like

I once was in like.
she was in love.
Passionate was she.
Who followed me.
An hour she'd wait.
For a chance to say.
Something real quick.
As I went on my way.
I called her to hang.
On New years day.
She held me tightly.
And I whispered quietly.
Are we more then just friends.

2 comments:

  1. I love the flow of the poem, and the fact that indeed seems to rhyme! Sad, so you didnt love her back? hmph... poor girl!

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  2. Van Halen said it best "how do I know when it love". I think telling someone you love them with young relationships coming and going just break hearts and causes tears. Personally I will only tell my wife I love her.

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