Kyle and Karl are driving in the carpool lane. Its pouring out side, the temperature is in the low sixties.
Camera angle is whatever the director thinks is an excellent idea.
Karl: It wasn't what it looked liked.
Kyle: The weather is fine.
Karl: You need to let me explain.
Kyle: Well, I already know.
Karl: You do?
Kyle: Yes, the clouds they get all puffed up.....their built to spill.
Karl: You can't go on pushing this out of your mind.
Kyle: Did you watch the Raiders game last night.
Karl: No, and you know where I was.
Kyle: I did, I do?
Karl: What I've done is wrong, and I need to make amends to you.
Kyle: Just let it go and don't ever bring it up again.
Karl: Kyle I want to make it up to you.
Kyle: I've never been sorry, I've just been caught.
Karl: What are you saying?
Kyle: Whats to say your any different?
Karl: No, I'm......
Kyle: What? What? What? I've known about this for years.
Karl: I don't know what to say.
Kyle: Then don't say anything at all.
(Hours pass.)
Kyle:I smell bacon.
Police Office: Hey you cannot drive in carpool without a passenger.
Camera pans out as Kyle starts to yell so loud the whole earth hears it.
I really like the Vanilla Skies idea so kind of steal it, but don't make it obvious.
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hahaha very tight styke... I love the part at the end with the po-po. and especailly the bacon! mmmmmmmmmm...... bacon.....
ReplyDeleteBacon is not good because it can kill you if you choke on it but i liked the part when he is jus talking to himself and then the cop comes hahahaha its nice
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